Elephantspike wrote:
bedbugy1 wrote:
just got back from a spending spree
bought some dandy shoes and socks
the b/f remarks
how much
is this the same with your b/f
Not sure, but if you phrase it like this, it makes great Haiku:
Just got back from a
spending spree bought some dandy
shoes, socks, boy remarks
It's a beautiful phrase!
I agree, Elephantspike. I think I've already posted this - although a cursory search didn't turn up anything - so I'll mention it (perhaps) again:
Did you know that
any haiku can be sung to the tune of "Moonlight in Vermont"? Members old enough to remember or have been exposed to older standard songs from the 40's or 50's have undoubtedly heard it. Try it!
Five beats to the line
Seven beats then five again
Everything's haiku
(with thanks to Jon Carroll of the San Francisco Chronicle)